Third Eye of the Sightless Woman
Deprived of what doctors call normal vision,
she still envisioned worlds beyond worlds;
seeing each person beneath their form or color,
she possessed the gift of sight in her ears.
She heard beauty, shame, promise of each person
and saw their auras while listening to their stories.
Behind the vague stare was a screen of inner vision,
and here ran a constant stream of color and shape,
as all things passed her acute field of hearing.
Dogs barking in sharp blacks and whites.
Birds whirling in dissipating pinks and ochres.
Breezes green with promise of pale cyan rain.
But music – ah! music held the entire palette.
Symphonic orchestras, brilliant watercolor fields.
Strings pulling rakes to mingle azures and apricots,
brass spotting canvas with dots and long sturdy lines
of coral and dust, the silverfoil tingle of cymbals.
Jazz was denser; oils, perhaps, a thicker base.
Saxes hacking crimson into piano’s sepia lines.
drums ticking tapping low, inking ebony onto the canvas.
The singer could be violet, Ivy Anderson; sapphire,
Ethel Waters; or Julie London’s burgundy midnight.
And Billie: Dry-brushed for texture, always blue.
© 2011 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
dverse poetry asked for poems about opening one’s third eye. My best vision has always been heard (synesthesia adds to this; because of my condition, I often hear sight patterns). And so I gifted my subject with a different kind of sight. This is also posted at my poetic heart, Poets United. Peace, Amy
kaykuala
Amy,
Sight patterns? Something beneficial and can help why not use it. I’ve no idea what it is. The prompt apparently is just perfect for you, given the advantage. Thanks for sharing!
Hank
Sharp Little Pencil
Probably a side effect of my meds, according to my psychiatrist. He asked if it caused problems; I replied, “No, I kind of groove on them.” He laughed and said, “Groove on!”
Thanks for stopping, Hank! Amy
Linda Kruschke
Amy, I really like this poem. The only thing I didn’t like was the idea that all dogs bark in black and white. I have a little cockapoo who barks and howls in a whole range of colors. When we leave, his cry is a definite shade of blue. When he encountered a racoon in our garage, it was a very red bark. When my son teases him by juggling his tennis balls, I hear shades of green. I do love the idea of hearing colors and patterns. Very cool. Peace, Linda
Sharp Little Pencil
Well, Linda, it sounds as though you already hear those colors. Since I was working from my own imagination, I think a keyboard came to mind, as well as the staccato of my old fox terrier’s bark. Thanks for your comment… I learn something new every day! Peace, Amy
Debbie
This is just so full! Love it! 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks, Debbie. I imagine this woman as someone with whom I would want to share an afternoon with at a local cafe. Peace, Amy
mish
I love the way you blended sound , colour & texture … awesome writing ! 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Mish, thanks so much, especially for noting the texture – not only watercolors vs. oils, but in Billie Holiday’s voice. You are a careful reader; I appreciate that quality! Peace, Amy
viv blake
Amy that’s a mind blowing poem – absolutely gripping and so beautifully written.
Sharp Little Pencil
Viv, when I can blow YOUR mind, I know I’m writing at my best! Thank you so much for this compliment. I did work hard on the edits, because even though the woman herself is fictional, she’s so real to me, I wanted to do right by her. Peace, Amy
http://hypercryptical.blogspot.com
Beautiful stuff Amy.
I see more through my ears – but not as synesthesia – as listening evokes more deeper emotions than sight. A sad face tells a story – but not the complete story. What better understanding can be found than in the art of listening.
For sure, a visual image of a tragedy illicits a multitude of emotions – but listening to the thoughts of your own mind is more graphic.
You have visited my blog before dear Amy and indeed I owe you (a long overdue) email. Will endevour to correct my lassitude asap.
Sharp Little Pencil
Goodness, never bear the burden of guilt for not emailing me! I’m lame about checking mine, anyway, LOL.
I understand what you mean. The pure art of listening is endangered – especially as we are surrounded by more and more media. The younger generation cannot simply BE and listen and take in what’s being said. Too many visuals – even in most restaurants, they have installed TVs and, with sound turned down, use closed captioning, which is often misspelled because it’s done with a voice recognition software…
A pastor whom I very much admire taught me that, at times, one can take in a sermon better with one’s eyes closed: “But if you start to snore, you’ll get in trouble!” He was serious, though; I tend to listen to scripture readings with eyes closed, too. Peace, and keep on listening! Amy
Mike Patrick
Amy, this one brought a tear to my third eye. I thought I was the only one who sees music.
Sharp Little Pencil
Mike, I’m really touched. This woman is fictional, but I have friends who see notes in different colors (my friend Rick sees D as red). I close my eyes when I listen (unless there’s a singer – then I’m all about eye contact), and do get a spectrum as well, along with the “raking” and the rest. Thought it would be a good gift for my fictional friend to have.
A tear to your THIRD eye. I just re-read your comment. What a stinker, ha ha ha. Love to you and yours, Amy
Judith
Oh I really love that. thanks for writing it and sharing it.
Sharp Little Pencil
Thank you for stopping by, Judith! Amy
booguloo
Shaping the world though the colors of sound is indeed a beautiful gift!
Sharp Little Pencil
Although the actual woman is fictional, I’ve taken some qualities I experience and some from friends. Thanks, Michael! A
brian
ha a guy that used to come and tune our piano…blind but could he see…this reminded me of him…and he could tune an instrument better than anyone with sight i knew…lovely write…
Sharp Little Pencil
Oh, yes, think about Art Tatum, George Shearing… their “sight” was inner and audial. I’m not surprised about your tuner. That acuteness of hearing can be a real asset. Thanks, Brian, Amy
Laurie Kolp
Amy~ I want one of your chapbooks… will send check this week.
Sharp Little Pencil
Bless your heart, Laurie, and thanks for supporting my efforts… much love, Amy
Roger Green
this reminds me of a friend of my wife’s, who called today to see how we were doing in the Northeast after Irene, who read auras.
Sharp Little Pencil
I’ve known several people who can read auras. I should have known years ago that I was manic depressive because they would comment on a sudden change in mine. Thanks, Roger! amy
Pat Hatt
Wow that third eye really takes the cake with music. So descriptive and word play upon word play. It had a beat all it’s own, wonderful verse.
Sharp Little Pencil
Pat, I appreciate this. Tried to find a different angle on the Third Eye, as it’s sort of a well-worn path, poetically. Thanks very much! A
DW
this had a flow, reminding me of a well worn novel. the kind you pick up and read over and over.
bravo
Sharp Little Pencil
Wow, David, this is quite a compliment. Thank you so much, I’m blushing, already! Amy
MiskMask
You’ve painted a spectacular visual feast with this one, Amy. You’re a very nimble poet. 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
“Nimble” isn’t a word often applied to me, but in the context of writing, I’ll take it! Thanks so much for this wonderful compliment, Marilyn. Love, Amy
Rosemary Nissen-Wade aka SnakyPoet
Wonderful! I was wondering if your subject had lost her sight after having it for a while – that’s how real you made her!
Sharp Little Pencil
Hadn’t really taken that into consideration… just sort of looked into her mind and saw what she perceived. Thanks for the “making her real” comment, that’s just great, Rosemary. Peace, Amy
nan
gorgeous imagery. I can see it. I can hear it. Bravo!
Sharp Little Pencil
Nan, this is probably the best feedback on a poem I’ve had in quite a while. I appreciate it very much. Thanks, Amy
Leif G.S. Notae
Wonderful take on the prompt, the sounds as color phenomenon is something I haven’t heard of but I’m sure it would make for a fascinating work from my brain. I can imagine the wonderful colors I could hear (it’d mostly be black, black and dark).
Thanks for sharing Amy, always appreciate your writes!
Sharp Little Pencil
Leiffy, my bud, thank you for a thoughtful comment. I laughed when I read YOUR color palette… I’ll bet you could conjure at least a bit of sapphire! Peace, Amy
Heaven
I like the textures, images and colours of your poem. Just beautiful specially these lines ~
Symphonic orchestras, brilliant watercolor fields.
Strings pulling rakes to mingle azures and apricots,
brass spotting canvas with dots and long sturdy lines
of coral and dust, the silverfoil tingle of cymbals.
Sharp Little Pencil
I’m so glad you like this. Yes, thanks also for picking up on the textures. They were an important part of my vision… of her vision. Peace, Amy
Jeff
The poet has sung her sweet rhapsody . . . and I saw it.
Cheers!
Sharp Little Pencil
Jeff, a very sweet comment. Much appreciate it. “Sweet Rhapsody,” sounds like an Ellington tune, I think. Glad you saw it! Amy
Claudia
i heard about this…very interesting and fascinating if you can hear colors or patterns…gives you a complete different feeling for the world…sounds gorgeous amy…
Sharp Little Pencil
Thank you, Claudia! I’m going to be a bit scarce the next couple of weeks, but I’ll check in with you soon (editing job). Peace, A
Wyoming Diva
Music, indeed, holds the entire palette! Well written!
Sharp Little Pencil
Lovely comment, Wy Diva, to this WI Diva, ha ha. I’m going to be a bit scarce – editing gig – for two weeks, then I’ll be back. Thanks! A
Charles Elliott aka Beautyseer
Intriging. I have read that sesation switching is possible. What some may call a disorder seems to me to be an amazing real gift. Still trying to just see auras, myself! So much of perception is selectively conditioned, and I continue to want to see the world through ever-new eyes. Thanks for stimulating the word processing centers of my normally-gray matter. ( : 0= }
Sharp Little Pencil
Ah, Charles, isn’t the world filled with amazement and beauty? It’s true – one woman I know said, ‘I hate it when people call me visually challenged. I’m BLIND! What’s the big deal? I have more beauty floating around in my brain, I’m afraid actually seeing things would be a disappointment.’
Now THAT’S living. Seeing the world through ever-new eyes. Sounds like a child, in a way. In a very good way. Thanks, Charles, and peace, Amy
Bodhirose
I love this and I totally knew what you were describing, Amy. I saw a documentary on people with this ability–fascinating! The brain is an amazing thing.
Sharp Little Pencil
More amazing the more I read the works of others, too. I have synaesthesia, where I hear eye movements and sometimes hear music, chorded music, coming out of electric fans!
I’m gonna be scarce for the next bit, Gayle – editing gig, so I hope you will be patient with me if I don’t visit your blog until after 9/15. Thanks, Amy
safehousepoetry
You really made me see what this woman sees without the use of seeing eyes. I loved all the color play. This was wonderful!
Sharp Little Pencil
Thank you for stopping by. I’ve put in a request to see your blog.
This was by far my favorite poem to write in a long while. The ‘third eye’ prompt struck me with the idea… I’ll be a bit scarce (editing gig) but back after 9/15. Peace, Amy
Amanda Moore
gosh this is fabulous from beginning to end. I loved how you included Julie London in this I wonder how many of her readers will know her, I listened to her as a child (via my parents).
Sharp Little Pencil
Remember Julie was married to Bobby Troupe, who wrote “Route 66”? I have vinyl Julie; never parted with my records.
Thanks for your compliment, Amanda. I have an editing gig that will keep my busy until 9/15, but I’ll be back soon. Peace, Amy
jannie funster
As a jazz fan, consider me hooked on this poem! A thicker oilier base indeed, and lasts better than the lighter paints.
LOVE this! So glad she has her own vision to share.
Sharp Little Pencil
Jannie, you’re a jazz fan, too! Neat. My folks turned me onto jazz too; my mom was a pro singer and so am I!
So glad you liked the textural parts of the poem. It all started writing itself after a little while, and the more I closed my eyes, the more I could see the “feel” of her vision. I actually “hear’ eye movements, it’s called synesthesia.
I’m on an editing gig until 9/15 but will started visiting again after that! Peace, Amy
hollyheir
A poem after my own heart – You were hitting all the licks here! Sight in your ears, art in the sounds, transportation from the world now at our fingertips. Perhaps even more thankful than I am for hot running water, for the gift of music in my life. I sense it is yours too. I wish I’d found a career in that business because doing anything with music is purest joy! Lovely piece. Thanks!!!
Sharp Little Pencil
“Hitting all the licks!” Man, you are down with the lingo, girl. Music is the greatest gift of all. I had a career, quite steady, in piano/vocals and songwriting which I still do from time to time. Came naturally.
I have an editing gig that’s taking up all my time until about 9/15, so I will be back to visit you then. Peace, Amy
christine
very descriptive, beautiful imagery found here
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks, Christine. This one has generated some amazing comments, very reflective.
I keep repeating this in my replies… but I’ll be scarce until after 9/15, an editing gig for a Hollywood autobiography. Peace, Amy
Sherry Blue Sky
Wow, Amy, one of your best. So interesting, hearing sight patterns. I love the idea of a sightless person “seeing” with their inner eye, and knowing people by sensing their auras……….very cool poem.
Sharp Little Pencil
You know, Sherry, I liked this one more than almost anything I’ve written. Perhaps it was getting outside my own navel-gazing self, huh?! This woman is amazing… I close my eyes and see what she sees. Maybe an alter ego…
Editing gig will keep me occupied until 9/15… will be back after that! Love, A
mareymercy
azz was denser; oils, perhaps, a thicker base.
Saxes hacking crimson into piano’s sepia lines.
drums ticking tapping low, inking ebony onto the canvas.
The singer could be violet, Ivy Anderson; sapphire,
Ethel Waters; or Julie London’s burgundy midnight.
And Billie: Dry-brushed for texture, always blue.
Love this entire stanza. 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Cynthia, I thank you for this. I simply enjoyed writing this poem, editing it… finding nuances. So glad you liked that textural feel as well!
I have an editing gig and a deadline, but will be back after 9/15, I promise! Thanks so much. Glad we are in touch! Peace, Amy
Renee Espriu
I always think if I ever lose my sight please let my hearing remain so that music will still be mine to give joy, comfort and any other emotion…much like the ‘palette’ you refer to. This is simply beautiful, Amy!
Sharp Little Pencil
Renee, thanks so much. Sorry for the lag in commenting, but I had an editing gig and a deadline! Peace, Amy