Whoa, babe, first day of PAD (Poem a Day, all April), and it’s a trifecta! Process notes below, but first, the poem.
REFLECTOR BABE
If I could have one power
it probably would be
a magic mirror carried
all over town with me.
If someone shouted, “N*****!”
I’d take it from my purse
to hold it up before them
and then they’d want to curse;
for they would see a black face,
they’d stare quite quizzically.
And then I’d asked them plainly,
“Do you see what I see?”
Or bullies shoving gay kids
into the garbage bin.
My mirror’d show them how they’d look
once they had been tossed in.
The rich would see the homeless,
the cheaters, a square dealer.
Oh, with my mirror, I might have
the powers of a healer.
For even if they didn’t change,
perhaps they’d take some time
reflecting on their ways, o Lord!
Would that not be sublime?
© 2012 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
For Sunday Scribblings (reflect), Poetic Bloomings (super hero), and Poets United’s Poetry Pantry. I thought about the prompt “reflect” and, rather than render another reflection about politics, child abuse, depression, or whatever the heck was on my mind, I’d use the mirror image. Then Blooms wanted poems about super heros, and since I had already posted “Volume Control Grrrl” (with a flick of my wrist, I could render booming car stereos mute, as well as people loudly discussing their gall bladder operations while I’m trying to eat at the next table), I thought this would be more in keeping with my values. And Poetry Pantry? Hell, I post EVERYTHING at Poets United, because they are my Gang of Many Wonderful People! Peace, Amy
ladynimue
Awesome !
This way would work well in the times to come Amy ..
We all need time to reflect on our actions ..
Sharp Little Pencil
It was that single word, “reflect,” that made me think of the mirror. Thanks, Nimue! Love, Amy
Rosemary Nissen-Wade
Good trifecta! 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Three is so rare for me, and I wasn’t trying to force the issue; it simply fell into place. I think maybe all the prompters went out for a beer one night and conspired! Thanks, Rosemary, and peace, Amy
Poetry & Icecream
You are so clever Amy, 3 prompts in one!!! I love the mirror image idea. Well done! 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks, Favorite Activity and Favorite Dessert Lady!!
Yeah, sometimes I get lucky. Ready, aim… SUPERPOEM. Peace, Amy
Misky
Sublime, indeed, as is this clever little piece.
Sharp Little Pencil
Misky, thanks so much! “Sublime” is one of my favorite words. I mean, what poet would not like a word that rhymes with “rhyme”? (wink) Amy
oldegg
That would indeed be sublime. The best thing to do with all the ugliness of man around us is to be be beautiful people, loving and caring and praying that one day our little footprint will make a difference.
Sharp Little Pencil
Yes, Robin. And ‘our little footprint’ is only as big as we make it – and that’s for better or for worse! Thanks for this comment. Peace, Amy
hypercryptical
This ad might interest you Amy – http://www.mirror.co.uk/news/uk-news/is-rape-advert-aimed-at-teens-the-most-752183 – I think it very effective.
It would indeed be sublime if folk would reflect on their ways, see the harm that the do and appreciate the hurt they cause.
Anna :o]
Sharp Little Pencil
Oh, hyper, from your lips to the Creator’s ears. We, as a species, are doing a spectacular job of blowing it, big-time and for all time. But then I strike up a conversation with a homeless guy on the street who has a nice thing to say… I find hope in the oddest places, and daily. EVERYONE READ THIS LINK FROM HYPER. It is EXACTLY what the poem says. I cannot thank you enough for this; I may re-run the poem with the advert on FaceBook. Peace, Amy
Inside the Mind of Isadora
This is fantastic, Amer. It would make those who cannot see finally see.
I want one, too. Hugs …..
Sharp Little Pencil
Izzy, sad part is, most who NEED one don’t want one… ironic, no? Peace, and love, Amer
Jae Rose
A mirror of truth..just like your writing..I do so admire you for that..Jae 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Jae, each one of us first gaze into our own mirrors and often write what we see in ourselves on any given day. Several of us do that – and it makes our writing all the more personal. Peace, Amy
tigerbrite
I love the concept of the Magic Mirror. Nicely done.
Mine is black obsidian.
Sharp Little Pencil
I want to see what you did with the prompt, or whatever you’re up to, so quick! Dust off the furniture, I’m coming over! (wink) Amy
Raven
Very well said.
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks, Raven, and peace, Amy
Pamela Smyk Cleary
Love this idea! When you find out where to get a mirror like this — I’ll take two! :-))
Sharp Little Pencil
Pamela, hello! The problem is, the people who need them the most don’t want them, right? I look in that mirror daily – and when I don’t like what I see, I try to change… Peace, Amy
vivinfrance
Powerful, meaningful, a worthy wish.
Sharp Little Pencil
Viv, you are a person I look up to in so many ways (no, I’m not talking age!). Thank you so much for this. Peace, Amy
Sherry Blue Sky
I LOVE this idea, Amy! Can someone please invent one??????
Sharp Little Pencil
I have one, but it’s verbal. And you know me, I am as diplomatic as possible, but I make my point! Love, Amy
Lance
vivid, strong, provocative and clear
This is what art is, Amy.
I’m so glad I found your blog.
Sharp Little Pencil
Lance, I am humbled by your comment. You keep writing, too, and someday we’ll meet up and have a coffee… or a beer, and read each other a bunch of great stuff! Peace, Amy
keiths ramblings
Fantastic! You show them. I so enjoyed reading this.
Sharp Little Pencil
Keith, I hear this a lot: “Amy, don’t hold back, tell us how you really feel.” Ha ha, but it’s true. We all have to call these bozos out on their crap, you know? It’s a smaller world than we think, and the old American Apple Pie Eurocentric “Straight is Great,” 2.3 kids and a dog in the suburbs ways do not hold water anymore. Appreciate your stopping in! Peace, Amy
braintomahawk
Wonderful! Just plain absolutely wonderful.
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks for coming over here! You have an intriguing blog name.. I’m coming over to see what gives! Peace, Amy
Mr. Walker
I like your super power and how you used it!
Richard
Sharp Little Pencil
Richard! Ghost Who Walks! Great to see you. This is when I realize I’ve been neglecting some prompts… have to get the routine going again, but I guess PAD April will keep me honest… Peace, Amy
kaykuala
That’s right Amy! Give the mirror treatment. They’ll see for themselves how nasty they are. The direct method can bring the realization!.
Hank
Sharp Little Pencil
Hank, I’d probably get shot before I got two blocks. That’s how nasty bigots are sometimes, and Wisconsin just got the Concealed Carry Law pushed through, so you never know. Some folks run out of words for debate awfully easily… Peace, Amy
brian miller
i wish we had a similar mirror as well…and wonder what people would really think if they could truly see….
Sharp Little Pencil
Like I said above, those who most need the mirror are probably the least likely to be affected by what they see… sad but true. But, hey, having super powers is all about the fantasy, and I wouldn’t need a special costume! Peace, Amy
Beriowne
You are indeed an activist, Amy. More power to you…
Sharp Little Pencil
Berowne, you know me so well. It’s one of my favorite titles besides “Mom.” Peace, Amy
Sandra
Amy, this is brilliant. You put so beautifully a powerful message into a poem. It would really be something if your mirror does make these people stop and reflect upon their actions. I wish it were that people are all good, but some people still need a little help.
Sharp Little Pencil
Sandra, thanks for visiting! You know, I’m sure if I held a mirror up to the Koch Brothers, all they would see is greedy sons trust-fund babies who never worked for anything their whole lives. And they wouldn’t give a hoot! Peace, Amy
Lindy Lee
Your sublime mirror would do well for some of the politicians seen in recent months, if only they had good vision…
ms pie
i cannot help but to imagine one shining so brightly only to see truth and given grace… it hurts to know how we hurt regardless of how unintentional it is…
Sharp Little Pencil
Would that that were so, Pie. My mom always said God gave us two ears and one mouth, and that there was a reason for that ratio. Perhaps if we all used a bit of mindfulness before speaking? But the truly mindful aren’t the ones who need the filters!! Oy. Thanks so much, saw you over at Evelyn’s and commented on YOUR comment there! Peace, Amy