Sunburn
Growing up, we had a pool.
This guaranteed us friends
during dog days, kids diving
for pennies, singing along to
my sister’s transistor radio.
I learned to be graceful there.
Normally prone to clumsiness,
I glided like a siren on her way to
a gig tempting sailors who’d crash
their crafts on the rocks below.
Underwater, the mermaid learned
how to swim a full lap in one breath,
then two laps. But the best part was
dinner hour, when the kids got called
home and I had the pool to myself.
Dad worked hard and drank late,
so we’d eat whenever he drove in.
One afternoon, I lay face-down
on a long raft, hands grazing water
as one bothers timothy grass in the field.
No one called me in for supper.
Result? Even Black Irish, brown-eyed
girls get the occasional sunburn, but
this was a blistering, “degree” burn,
with ointments and aloe and sympathy.
As the burn dried and began to peel,
my sister Jo used her nails to scratch
a perfect heart on my back. This artwork
grossed out the kids, which was, of course,
the point.
© Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
Karin Gustafson, hosting dverse today, wanted memories of summer. This one stuck with me for two reasons; first, my sisters took after my English father, blonde hair and blue eyes, and they burned easily, so my mother’s brown-eyed Irish heritage usually saved me from that fate. Second, the fact that my sister Jo would take so much time creating on my back made me feel special.
Also at my poetic kiddie pool, Poets United. Peace, Amy
claudia
ugh on the sunburn…a friend of mine had once such a blistering one in the face and he really suffered a lot.. we always went to the public pool as kids or to a nearby river and spent hours and hours in the water.. magical times.. sigh…and hey…artwork on a peeling back..that is pretty revolutionary…just saying..smiles
pandamoniumcat
It’s funny this mirrors my childhood, we had a pool and would spend hours laying on the lilo’s, making waves pretending we were on the ocean, diving for pennies, and holding our breath…loads of friends and fun…Oh and the sunburn too! I can really relate to this… could have been my backyard! I really enjoy my visits here…
John (@bookdreamer)
Fair hair and freckle Irish here so I would have been no fun for art to gross. Although I did swell up like billy bunter and then have blisters as big as plates all over…that you could prick
Debbie
I love your summer memories . .. thank you for sharing, in that special Amy way!
Gemma Wiseman
An amazing summer with a kind of sunburn celebration!
Love the nod to legend in:
“I glided like a siren on her way to
a gig tempting sailors who’d crash
their crafts on the rocks below.”
Enjoyed this story in poetry!
Polly Robinson
Oh dear re sunburn, yippee re heart 🙂
Roger Green
My grandma’s next door neighbors had a above-ground pool. Spent a lot of time there in the summer. Didn’t really learn to swim as such, but I got really good at holding my breath for well over a minute.
Daydreamertoo
Awww…happy memories here. Yikes on falling asleep and the sunburn though. I did that when I was 15, it took days for the pain to subside. This was such a lovely read. I love that your sister was so creative she peeled you to have a heart on your back… lol
brian miller
ouch…had a really nasty burn in NC one year…had sun poisoning, brutal…funny on the heart on the back, but cool it was a heart even if it grossed others out….we had a creek which might as well have been a pool…i like how even though this is light you include the edges of shadow to give this texture…
Laurie Kolp
Ouch!
This is so beautifully written, Amy. I especially like:
One afternoon, I lay face-down
on a long raft, hands grazing water
as one bothers timothy grass in the field.
ManicDdaily
The burn is fun and interesting (and a great memory told with a lot of narrative flare) but the first three stanzas I found just beautiful – the re-creation of that pool time, the diving, mermaiding, your sister’s “gig”, the water like timothy– this was all especially lovely I thought, so evocative–the whole poem really tells a story. k.
Archna
I like the image of your sister sculpting love on your back, but really Amy, that sounds so painful. I’m glad that the pool made your summers so special. 🙂
Renee Espriu
Yes, even olive complexion kids get sunburned. I didn’t so much growing up as I lived outside all the time but when I got older and did not go out so much, I found out how awful a sunburn can feel. Sympathy in times like these is a good thing.
zongrik
being a kid and learning to do laps in one breath is…ummmm…what kids do!!!
under windsor bridge senryu
ds
Oh, I had a sunburn like that as a kid. Can still feel the pain. Love the details in your poem: learning to swim laps in one breath, “hands grazing water/ as one bothers timothy grass in the field”, and of course your sister carving her heart into your back.
Thank you.
Mary
Loved your summer memories, Amy. Lucky you to grow up with a pool. I remember those years we wanted to suntan/burn. Thank goodness we all wised up. That burn must have been awful, and then the heart in it must have been quite a sight!!
kaykuala
A pity they didn’t call you over, Amy! Getting sunburned without blocks can be nasty. The worst moments were the initial few days. We used to go for river expeditions. We were forewarned to be covered but somehow the nape of the neck remained exposed. It was not a bother initially. We glided in mid stream normally so we were in direct sunlight. The searing pains came on the second day. The peeling off followed for the next week. But it was fun. Wonderful write Amy!
Hank
SilverGardenia
Nice poem. Glad you could turn something painful into a good story.
dani
your sister’s my kind of girl!
♥
Madeleine Begun Kane
What an odd story, beautifully told.
Kathy
For all who can relate, you reminisced very well how it was..
Rallentanda
Your Granny was a true Christian.
Sarav
Beautiful words, “hands grazing water
as one bothers timothy grass in the field” A beautiful image.
I love to stroke water with my fingers, softly so it feels like little water kisses…