These poems are dedicated to the women of Afghanistan, and I thank Kenia at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads for introducing us to the landai, the form of which is explained below in notes, along with other information. This is also on the sidebar at Poets United and at ABC Wednesday, where we are on the letter “J.” This is my favorite J word. Peace, Amy
JUSTICE for women in oppressive regimes
How can ‘women’s spirits hold up half the sky’*
when their earthbound selves swelter under the burqa
Women nurture their baby boys at swollen breasts
only to watch them grow up and oppress their mothers
I am ten paces behind my husband, I make out his shape through net
I am ten generations behind my husband – this burqa, my ceiling
She wanted only to read, write, work figures, create
Acid was tossed in my little girl’s face for this grave sin
Mullah in the madrassa, my brother’s fate in his hands
Mother in the market, her fate already decided
How can I find peace with Americans on my street
when uniforms and guns serve as their faces?
The Prophet (PBUH)** elevated women to rights and inheritance
Ayatollahs strip us of those rights and instead force upon us burqas
On a day I will never live to see, my daughter will shed her burqa,
renounce the veil, leave this town, go to university, be free
© 2012 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
* Kenia encouraged cooperation and playing off one another’s landai. This line, an old Chinese proverb, was used in a landai by Sherry Blue Sky – view her collection HERE.
** “Peace Be Upon Him,” traditionally said after invoking the name of either “The Prophet” or “The Prophet Mohammed.”
NOTES: According to Kenia at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads:
“The word landai means “short, poisonous snake” in Pashto. The poems are (two lines and) collective — no single person writes a landai; a woman repeats one, shares one. It is hers and not hers. Although men do recite them, almost all are cast in the voices of women.”
I had only to think of a movie I saw yesterday, Kandahar (2001). A woman who had escaped Afghanistan years before seeks to return, as her sister has written she plans to take her own life. Based on the story of Nelofer Pazira, who stars in the movie, I was struck by how the burqas had festive colors, since the burqa itself stands as a disgrace upon the leaders of conservative nations. It is a socioeconomic stance, country by country, as to what women are allowed to wear, whether they may attend school… whether they can stay alive when they fall down and accidentally show an ankle. Another movie about the lives of women in brutal regimes, also based on a true story – tough to watch but important to witness: The Stoning of Soraya M.
Wanda
Very very powerful writing. Oh how badly we need Justice. Thank you for using this meme for such an important message.
Sharp Little Pencil
Wanda, thanks for visiting and commenting. Yes, it is about justice… but more in later comments, I believe! Will pop over and see your blog! Amy
Dina
Oddly appropriate for me to enter your blog first time at this poem-message.
Greetings from the Middle East.
kaykuala
Muslim women are not to cover all. Their faces and palms are allowed to be seen (exactly as a nun in her order) In a society however there are extremes. They manifest their choices in practices that are seen as ‘different’. It’s more so critical when backed by religious reasoning. Then these become restrictive and seen as unreasonable. When religion is invoked logic is cast aside. What is at fault is not religion but narrow interpretation of rules and regulations by the society which moderates in other societies do not conform to.
Thought provoking Amy! Mark of an informed mind. Beautiful verse and great process notes!
Hank.
Sharp Little Pencil
Hank, I emailed my reply. I guess I wasn’t stressing enough the fact that burqas are not universally used in the Muslim world. Since this prompt comes from Afghanistan, where the landai was created and where burqas ARE required, that was my focus. The rest will be in email. THANKS for commenting; it was thought provoking and you remind me I must be clear in my posts! Peace, Amy
vivinfrance
I am of one mind with you on this. But there is a glimmer of hope: many Muslim nations included women in their Olympic teams, obviously wearing no lycra!
Roger Green
progress comes slowly. this is why lots of people reject religion altogether, including Christianity
sreeja
Rebellious and so power-packed…..great!
ladynimue
A friend of mine likes to wear burqa. But she does it ’cause it makes her feel comfortable travelling any where , no matter what she wears below it and to avoid people’s interference about her clothes. she loves poetry , loves meeting friends and is a real gem to know. I like that her parents do not force any life style on her but she chose to live by her rules – whatever they be. that in my opinion is freedom 🙂
a strong voice here as always Amy !
Bless you 🙂
brian miller
really nice….and very cool form, some power statements that each carry a punch…you bring out several aspects as well…really like the first three…there is a nice rhythm within them and truth is unscrolled creatively as well….
o loke nimue’s comment as well…that is true freedom, not forced yet choosing to follow….
aprille
Very punchy and to the point.
I wonder if any of this would help?
Even if it is just a foot in the door, [so to speak].
Carver
A very powerful post on an important topic. Carver, ABC Wed. Team
Grace
I love this…specially the nurturing of the boy and walking behind the husband ~ You tell of the oppression very well ~ Your last line is my hope for all these women ~
Kerry O'Connor
I found each couplet to be extremely potent, and taken together there is enough power here to change the world.
Just a big Wow! from me.
Sherry Blue Sky
Fantastic landai, kiddo. Awesome, inspiring and heart-rending. Wowzers! I will watch that movie. And there is a book called Half the Sky:Turning Oppression Into Opportunity for Women Worldwide, by Nicholas Kristof and Sheryl WuDunn, – what women suffer, how they triumph over brutal regimes……..great reading.
Laura Maria
The second one is so sad. Don’t they realize their injustice?
Ribbons Undone
LOVE THIS. I had a friend ( we used to be friends but not now) who converted from Christianity to be a conservative Muslim. She doesn’t wear a burqa, but it is very similar. She is covered head to toe with only her face and hands showing. When she goes to mosque, she has to cover up everything but her eyes. She says, “If women are free to take off their clothes, why can’t they be free to cover up?” Changing religions I have no problem with. Keeping women under the proverbial thumb, I do have problems with. Big problems.
lmkazmierczak
Oh that that last line become true♪
Meryl
What an outstanding post!!!! This is so important and you so urgently and passionately expressed what needed to be said.
Debbie
Thank you, Amy! Really well done and giving hope of a one day . . .of being free. God bless you!
ohcgd
You have a great great for conveying things of this magnitude in short writings.You truly do.
I saw this first hand in Iraq. Not only are women treated as less than human, they were doing all the physical work while the men stood by chatting with one another. In a year and a half in that country, hitting every major city and corner of it, I never saw a woman’s face, heard one speak, nor had one ever looked me in my eye.
It really tries your compassion for the oppressive folks. .
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly)
There is so strength and power in this….It is hand clenched compassion.
SaraV
Amy, what an amazing poem. It is unconscionable that this type of oppression exists. It is beyond belief what is allowed and accepted-expected. You captured it perfectly in the line of the mother feeding her son, only to have him grow up and be part of the oppressors. Excellent!
tigerbrite
Very powerful, as always, Amy 🙂
Polly Robinson
Powerful stuff, well-written.
Serena
Amy, these are very powerful lines… the kind that remind me to not take anything for granted and to not forget the women in the world who don’t have the most basic rights. There are women who are killed or beaten for writing poetry! Can you imagine? I read about such things and still I find it so hard to believe. Mainly because I don’t want to believe it! I’m still working on a piece about genital mutilation but I haven’t been able to finish it yet. Your words are amazing and have moved me to re-work my piece.
Thank you for your comments at my site. The form I used is called a pantoum… it’s one of the few forms I’ve been able to manage… usually I try and just fall flat. I’ve written a poem you might like called Where I Live… I wrote it after learning about women being killed for writing poetry. I tried to post a link here but it didn’t work. I’m going to check out more of your work here…
Mama Pajama
yes, yes, and yes. well done. great post, I’m glad I took the time to stop by. it’s late for me though, so I’ll probably have to come back and read it again. thanks for giving me something to think about, and introducing me to landai. ♥
Jolly
Wonderful collection, especially liked the one where the little boys feed and then oppress their mothers.
Mary Mansfield
Stunning! I love the sense of hope in the last one.
shakiraira
I love how bold and vivid your poem is. Great stuffs here. I love the last stanza. This is what we, the modern and educated mothers are all fighting for, with or without our men standing behind us . Fortunately for me, I have my man standing beside me and we just stand firm on our beliefs for the sake of our daughters’ future and future generations. It is so sad when people choose to MISINTERPRET what was so clearly written and even preached.
hugs
shakira
kimnelsonwrites
You moved me with this write, Amy. We must continue to raise and join our voices. I have not seen the PBS series based on the book, Half The Sky (which I love), but I will make an effort to record it.