Singer, Poet, Activist
Sings of love, peace, acceptance
Writes of mental illness, protest, LGBT alliance
(plus incest, sexual abuse and other taboos)
Acts to make the second shed its shame and
be embraced by the first
© 2012 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
For Trifecta, we were asked to write about “three things in one,” in exactly 33 words. Also at my poetic all-in-one site, Poets United (proud to be a member!). Peace, Amy
Renee Espriu
September 21, 2012 at 5:29 pm
Hear! Hear! Love what you do. http://reneejustturtleflight.com/2012/09/21/rolling-your-own/
kaykuala
September 21, 2012 at 8:36 pm
So much social ills exhausting the time and effort of those concerned few. Good communication could be of help. Conservative elements tend to put barriers! Yes,good thoughts to ponder Amy!
Hank
Roger Green
September 21, 2012 at 9:15 pm
sounds vaguely like someone I might have heard of
Serena
September 21, 2012 at 9:44 pm
wow… so much said in 33 words! I love poems like this that punch in the gut and set the mind to roiling… you can’t be blase (with an accent over the e) after reading this!
Lance
September 21, 2012 at 9:44 pm
This should be your business card.
wonderful
Wisper
September 21, 2012 at 10:11 pm
This is taking on quite a bit in so few words. It speaks volumes for what you can do with more…
brian miller
September 21, 2012 at 10:57 pm
as long as through it all she is an overcomer you know…smiles….we dont choose our life always….just what we do with it…
lumdog
September 22, 2012 at 10:43 am
I love how you put it all out there. And you do it so well through your beautiful poetry.
Sherry Blue Sky
September 22, 2012 at 10:51 am
Wow, you totally nailed it.
Lucy Sparks (@TransgentleWife)
September 22, 2012 at 11:54 am
Beautiful words. We sure do need more people like you in this world. Your honesty touches me.
deanabo
September 22, 2012 at 5:13 pm
Great post. It really pulled at my heart strings.
kenyagjohnson
September 22, 2012 at 6:26 pm
Love – being embraced by the first. Wow.
R.L.W.
September 22, 2012 at 8:50 pm
Beautiful work. Love the last two lines.
Stephanie B. (@B4Steph)
September 22, 2012 at 9:25 pm
Here, here! To be embraced by the first, shed its shame. Nicely done.
El Guapo
September 22, 2012 at 9:36 pm
The depth you bring to these is astounding.
Great job!
shakira
September 22, 2012 at 11:56 pm
Wow…great one! Kudos to you! What a wonderful being. Love your ending too! Great job! Keep up the wonderful work!
Have you a great and blessed weekend.
hugs
shakira
ba
September 23, 2012 at 12:34 am
oh, Amy – so deep in 33
barbara
September 23, 2012 at 12:35 am
ha – fast fingers. 😦
Amy Harrison
September 23, 2012 at 8:48 am
I totally understand mental illness 🙂 I have bad anxiety and depression 😦 But writing helps 😀 Great stuff! 😀
AmyBird x
Sarav
September 24, 2012 at 12:05 pm
Amy, rocking the prompts again! That is a perfect 33 word summary 🙂