Before I launch into the poem… It’s late at night, and I’m thinking about today’s horrific tragedy. I pray for the day when people won’t have to kill and maim others to “make a statement,” to draw attention to their cause, or whatever it is. The fact that today is also “tax day” may prove relevant, I don’t know. My prayers to all in Boston, to all who have lost someone or whose loved one is in hospital. My prayers that another entire class of people aren’t stigmatized because the perpetrator suffers from a particular mental disorder. My prayers for the soul of our nation as we continue to install puppet figureheads and then turn around a drop bombs on them when they don’t do our bidding. As we drop drones on innocents to “get” one “bad guy.” I guess I’m just praying for our world tonight.
I wrote this poem today while Lex and I lolled in a cafe, our favorite day-off pastime – this was written hours before Boston. Hope you can enjoy it despite what’s going on. This is for Poetic Bloomings’ prompt, Rain. Peace, Amy
Half a Rainstorm is Better Than None (Bermuda, 1987)
Favorite haunt in Hamilton.
A day-off treat, strong coffee
dense shortbread, and
small talk with a friend.
Sky darkens, pavement is
wet across the way.
We emerge, fully
expecting immersion.
Yet we’re on the “sunny side of the street.”
Rain spatters cobblestones in
a literal line drawn down the lane.
A meteorological DMZ.
Island storms are that specific.
I pass my hand into the storm and
pull it out again; palm to fingers, drenched.
It dries in the sun as we ponder miracles.
© 2013 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
I still remember that day. I had never seen the “edge of the storm,” nor did I know the concept existed. I’m not even sure Riley believes me! (“Whacky mom stories,” like meeting Bob Dylan and realizing he has zero charisma… or that my right ankle is thick because of an unfortunate intersection of tequila, Quaaludes, and hopscotch.)
Polly Robinson
Nature ~ always a source of wonder ~ you do her proud here Amy
oldegg
I love the idea of reaching your hand out into the rainfall, then pulling it out satisfied it was only the other side of the street that got it.
Lisa A.Williams
Beautiful Amy!
Mary
Well expressed, Amy. That would be an amazing experience to have. I wish we would be able to have it in these parts, and I’d always be lucky enough to be on the sunny side of the street. Smiles.
Roger Green
“always look on the bright side of life” – Life of Brian
Sharp Little Pencil
You are one sick man, and I love you for it.
kimnelsonwrites
You take me there, to the coffee shop and then the street. Your imagery is so effective. On another note, I am grateful that, even in times of tragedy goodness and beauty still find a way. This poem is an example.
Pamela
Beautiful image there, Amelita. I love the thought of putting your hand in the rain and pulling it back, nice. I am sorry I haven’t been around reading. I see I have missed some good work.
Saludos,
Pamelita
Sara v
Amy, rain in the tropics is so strange–it’s here, it’s not–it’s there, it’s not. It lasts 5 minutes, and then gone–very disorienting to me who came from CA (north, where we have weeks of rain) I find myself mentally prepping for the long haul, and then it’s nothing. The warmth of it is also mind boggling–warm rain, warm puddles? It’s another world for shore. And I still don’t have my mind wrapped around how someone could bomb the Boston marathon–for what? CRAZY. and extremely disheartening. De wrote a stellar piece about it.
ihatepoetry
I like when you take something ordinary – a rainy day – and find the miracle in it. Great poem, Ameleh.
I HAVE A VOICE
The movement in your words is a breezeway !
uponthewingsofnight
This reminds me of times when I would sit in Michelangelo’s on a rainy night and write poetry over fantastic dark roast coffee. Good work as always, Amy. Brett