FIRST: Still hanging in the Garden for NaPoWriMo, where Imaginary Garden With Real Toads’ Aprille challenged us to write a “double dactyl,” which is best explained HERE. Not sure I managed form correctly; I would love any constructive criticism. This is also at Poets United on the right “crawl.” Finally, my prayers to anyone else out there with PTSD, because I don’t know about anyone else, but I was hyperventilating into a paper bag last night. Too much.
Pointless (double dactyl-ish)
Ever since Boston, the
TV preempt, I’ve been
breathing through paper bags,
tot’lly farklempt.
PTSD holds me
in its sad thrall, what’s the
point of my watching the
TV at all?
© 2013 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
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SECOND: A free-verse rant about media in general… with specifics.
“Liking” Murrow on FaceBook
Yesterday, some hundred years ago,
we used newspapers for news flow
Radio then put us “In the Mood”
TV babysat us, totally glued
Roof antennae, CBS on the air
Dad adjusted via attic stair
Test patterns nightly, with droning tone
Cronkite and Murrow stood out… and alone
Then came the cable, a crapfest galore
With QVC “gotta-haves,” plus prime-time gore
Televangelists weeping, shouted HOMO
Then they begged money on bottom-crawl promo
All-night-long movies, MTV Michael
Later, the twenty-four hour faux news cycle
Now, the addiction is this Internet
Needn’t leave one’s snug abode to get
housewares, clothing, and even free porn
(Hide your identity, saves you from scorn)
Facebook, all social networking, damn!
Farmville, un-friending, broadcast nastygram
Huff Post huffs and puffs ‘bout the Right
By day, the Tea Party (dons hoods at night)
Hackers and hucksters, scams and teen passes
Internet: Opiate of the new masses
© 2013 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
The bottom of my email signature has a list of causes I support, along with a tag line: “Stop complaining; become part of the solution!” Seems like folks blow off steam on Facebook and via email forwards (some network blasts from Tea Partiers I know have been answered by me with calm, bullet-point questions and even suggestions… these are often answered with one line, like “You’re sadistic” or “Stop pushing your homosexual agenda at me.” (Ahem, who started the “dialog”?)
Manners are gone. Thing of the past. All that matters are angry birds, more cows for one’s farm (cyber-greed), and ranting online without doing much of anything other than spreading the word. Some is vitriolic, some is obscene, some is so darned funny I laugh my butt off and am immediately ashamed (as with Jim Carrey’s recent “Cold Dead Hands” song on a Hee-Haw set).
The Net is good for calls to action such as petitions, but the best action of all is LOG OFF AND MAKE A PHONE CALL. I have all my legislators’ local offices on speed-dial, plus the White House for my daily “Please stop the drones and bring our kids home” call. Most of the volunteers who staff those lines know me by now!
Log off. Pick up the phone. Give ‘em all hell, because they wheel and deal while you and I suffer and end up addicted to this interactive Oxycontin. Peace, Amy
othermary
Both of these are great Amy. You message takes the front seat as always. Kudos, and hope you’re feeling calmer soon.
Roger Green
Yes, news USED to be useful…
peggygoetz
Excellent double dactyl and rant as well!
Hannah Gosselin
I agree and I don’t. Good rant fit to form, Amy.
Mama Zen
That second piece had me standing up and cheering! Today, we have a high tech bread and circus to distract us while Rome burns.
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly)
So so true! I am waving my pom poms with Mama Zen.
Kerry O'Connor
Tragedies such as these hit hard, and in unexpected ways. I hope you are feeling better today.
aprille
So sorry that these events rake up your own memories of past traumas. I know it only too well, though I must say it gets better with time. I hope concentrating on creating the poetry took your mind off it for a little while.
Sara v
Amy, you are jammin! Excuse me while I catch my breath after reading everything. It is shocking how the current generation loathes the phone for it’s intended purpose–raised eyebrows–“You want me to call?!” text and email, FB Google+ are all they do, all they believe they should do–crazy. Excellent call to action–I have been calling, btw 😉
ihatepoetry
Ameleh – both were great – the 2nd especially good- yes, we are all so connected and yet all so disconnected. With everyone completely enthralled with their handheld items, it looks like a mass praying the mutant rosary.
Marian
hah, love em! especially the second, Amy. “hide your identity, saves you from scorn” right in the middle of all this made me guffaw rather loudly. 🙂
Andy Sewina
Hi Amy, Love that word farklempt, and the cool rant!
My Day Sixteen
Helen
I think you should run for office … we need women like you running the country!! Farklempt indeed!
lolamouse
I agree with both of your poetic rants. Sometimes I think we have too much info for our own good (or maybe the wrong type of info is more accurate.) I love the phrase “interactive oxycontin!”
elleceef
Well said,,,first true to form,,,second true about form,,,bravo for speaking your mind,,,
Margaret
Farklempt… I looked it up yiddish “choke up”… Ah now I remember “Coffee Talk”. Ha ha. Not a laughing matter, Boston, it sobers me right up. I watch one hour of news (Fox … sorry 🙂 if I watch any at all. I have my parents (80+) to fill me in as they watch “the news” 24/7.
The second poem … pure nostalgia for me. We couldn’t get cable and had a wire put on top of our roof so we could capture Madison, WI channels on a good day (I think we got 3 more that the 3 we had…)
Excellent poems, both. (I changed my log-in below so my blog should be connected now 🙂
Kay, Alberta, Canada
“Hyperventilating” is a 6-syllable word, but sorry you were doing it, sorrier yet for the reason you were doing it.
Lots of memories of the old days in your “rant”. I remember my dad buying me a transistor radio, sometime around 1960, and running antenna wire out my bedroom window to the roof, then he and I would sit up late to get “far away” radio stations.
We were in central British Columbia, but there was obviously a clear path past the mountains down the Okanagan Valley, through Washington and Oregon, and into California, because our big thrill was Sacramento, sometime around midnight. They advertised “Shakey’s Pizza Parlor” and I had no idea what pizza was. My dad had heard of it, but had never tasted it. He told me it was “cheese and tomato pie” which didn’t sound very appealing to a young teenager.
K
vivinfrance
One problem with the continuous news smotherage is that we become blunted to tragedy. Your two poems and the after-words say it all. Well done. I had to look up Oxy-Contin
Old Egg
The trouble is we are ambulance chasers but on our favorite media. Newspapers are dying as they are so out of date with their oh so late news. Electronic media are control devices and Maxwell Smart knew this nearly 50 years ago! Farklempt was new to me so had to look it up.
Sharp Little Pencil
FARKLEMPT COMMENTS: I used to be part of a Jewish family and picked up a lot of Yiddish and Hebrew expressions. FYI!
Mama Zen
I just had to come back and let you know that immediately after reading this yesterday I was inspired to call my representative and, um, express my opinion. Thanks for the nudge, Amy!
Sharp Little Pencil
All right! This is why I blog!!
Carver
You express yourself so well and creatively.
julespaige
Thanks for your visit to my distracting fantasy. I can only take so much of the real world. I know action is due. I volunteer in my community. Politics …I used to poke my nose and pen in the editorial section of the local paper with some regularity…but because you have identify yourself…well when I got a call from a complete stranger who looked me up. Damn that was just too scary. Didn’t matter that it was a positive note. I don’t want loonies parking their opinions at my doorstep either.
Miz Q prompted us to write about the news today. I took a general approach. You might enjoy the compactness of:
http://julesgemstonepages.wordpress.com/2013/04/18/choice-words-miz-q-18/
Always, Peace.
Lisa A.Williams
So true, we have lost ourselves in this media oriented society. Constantly being bombarded by the technical world, we have lost something. Days of tea and conversation are things of the past for most people. A powerful poem, expressing the thoughts of many.
Pamela
Well done, Amelita. I am looking for a paper bag right now. There has been a shooting at MIT tonight.
Pamela
lmkazmierczak
Pointed and poignant…enjoy reading through the comments to your excellent words and seeing the actions you inspire♫♪ Happy Thoughts♥