Sofia (anaphoric poem for a young soul)
Sofia’s sisters will write their symphonies
for the world in their world
Sofia’s song lies within, beautiful, sonorous,
hard to explain, yet unfailingly lovely…
filled with illusions and wonder
Sofia’s favorite pastime is looking in the mirror
God gazes back at her, through her eyes and
in her infectious smile; a face that is
a reflection of the face of God
Sofia’s sisters will have a different kind of freedom
Roaming the world, seeking their separate destinies
But she is the lucky one
Destiny has found her and
God holds her in strong arms
Sofia, your every breath is counted
and you will never be alone
Your name means wisdom and, though hidden,
it is real, a labyrinth that dwells deep and swells wide.
Sofia. Your witness is simply being; your song is of the soul.
© 2013 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
I had written this poem for Sofia, the daughter of my friends Daniel and Joy, during a visit to San Antonio years ago, but it never saw the light of day until this blessed move to our new home next to our church. My posting will be sporadic, but I’ll read more than I post for a few days on breaks from unpacking. This is at dverse, Poets United, and the garden I have sorely missed, Imaginary Garden With Real Toads.
dverse asked for Anaphoric poems, which have repeated words or sounds. I decided to use the name which became a song for playtime: Sofia.
When we were visiting, Sofia, who had a difficult delivery and will never function in “our ways” past a young age, delighted when I played with her. The song was “So-FIIIIII-aaaaa…” followed by long, silly phrases:
So-FIIII-aaaaa sits on the floor and plays with her box of stuff
(giggles)
So-FIIII-aaaaa picks up the box and dumps all the stuff on the floor
(dump and giggle)
On and on through picking up plastic horses and puzzle pieces to dumping it out again. Hers is a pure existence, and the reason she has a happy life lies with her family. Danny and Joy are parents who, when faced with the birth of a child who would never learn to read or write, refused to lock her away. Her sisters, Veronica, Eva, and Carmen, love her for who she is, and Sofia is safe from caring when they pass her milestones; they are all equally loved by their parents and their larger family as individuals. This is a family of deep faith and a strong sense that they have been blessed by God with Sofia. My heart this day is with Daniel and Joy, with their able girls, and with that specially abled young woman, Sofia. Paz, y con mucho amor, Amy
Audrey Howitt
Ah this is lovely Amy–particularly the last stanza and your close—
Marya
Oh, what a lovely premise. Sofia sounds beautiful! Good luck with the unpacking.
brian miller
smiles…you are a bright soul..and i know that even though she may live a life differently the time you played with her will be special…the whole thing is wonderful but the last 2 lines in particular, i like much…smiles.
Victoria C. Slotto
Just beautiful. I have a beautiful print of Sofia/wisdom in my office and right from the first stanza she came to mind. What a beautiful story underlies this. Gave me chills. Congrats on your move.
Roger Green
Amy, you’re BAAACK!! Happy, happy, joy, joy..
El Guapo
Beautiful poem! I’m glad it made it out!
And glad that you’re up to the unpacking and settling in phase.
Polly Robinson
A wonderful poem and a wonderful story. Good to see the move progresses 🙂
Sherry Blue Sky
Amy, this is so absolutely heartwarming. I love to hear about intelligent, loving, accepting and wonderful people like this family. It is the way it should be. I LOVE your song to Sofia, dumping out the toys, and making her giggle. “Sofia’s song lies within”…..so incredibly lovely. I love that child, just from this poem. And you, Ms. Braveheart.
seingraham
Ames! I’m so happy to read your work again! This is wonderful…a great tribute…I know I’ve been MIA and it sounds like you have been on and off as well. You moved again, yes? That’s usually really hard on me, do you move easily? I sound as scattered as I’m beginning to feel…up too long today, I guess. Keep in touch, okay? I’ll try to do likewise.
http://nsaynne.wordpress.com/2013/06/27/what-it-means/
Misky
This is gorgeous, Amy. Steady on with the unpacking, and stay well, my friend.
J Cosmo Newbery
Beautiful Amy. (Welcome back!)
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Kerry O'Connor
Your description of Sofia is written with real tenderness and attention to detail. I really loved your description in stanza 3, of her gazing into a mirror and seeing God.
claudia
oh you manage to capture her special-ness in such a beautiful way.. full of warmth and magic… and glad to hear that she’s so loved and blessed with her fam as well
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
What a great sweet poem for Sofia.. a lovely name and a lovely meaning… Great poem
kaykuala
1.It would be trying times! It was noble for her parents to accept realities balanced with emotional strength.They decided to keep her unlike some others who abandoned such mentally challenged off-springs.
2. Nice to have you back!
3. Remember when unpacking, a sage once said, “the fastest way to do it is to do one thing at a time!” Thanks for sharing Amelita!
Hank
tigerbrite
Tender poem. Best wishes in your new home:)
tigerbrite
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lolamouse
Just lovely. The joy of a child is a beautiful thing. Your poem is a great tribute to these loving parents.
Sara v
Hi Amy!!! I have missed you–welcome back and Happy Housewarming for your new home. Isn’t it fun the things we find, when we move (well, most of the time…) A wonderful poem and what an amazing story–LOVE it 🙂
I HAVE A VOICE
magnificent !
jlynn sheridan
The first line was outstanding, Amy. I like how it began with Sophia’s sisters but it was about Sophia.