The WiRE Part I
Here on Roo’s Island, beneath the rot-rusted trolley bridge (unstable, but no one had actually plunged to their death in years); here at the calm elbow bend of turned benches in Rock Park, Jordan could bear life as it was, in the Now.
Her Agency shift just finished; sorting the castoff crapfeed of the rich, separating Styrofoam from oily bits of foiling and whathaveyous. This place was her reward, her retreat, her parkit.
Although The Big Thing had laid waste to millions of people and many species of wild animals, plus many rabbles of butterflies – the heartbreak of that lay heavy – they thanked the Creator for honeybees whose hives still functioned, for bats that survived. There was still the shabblestone lane, a hazard… once smooth red brick, now jagged, tearing at her tragictrashed sneaks. Her shoes were sturdy and loyal, but they were also more duct tape than canvas.
Jordan could bear it here, imagine a bluebird perched on the blind light pole, part of the lost heaven her Gram described for her daily, like a multi-faceted mantra. “Oh, the meadow,” Tilly would sigh, her delicate parchment hands navigating tea from pot to cup. “It was all so green, until the Powers got fractious and on a flashnight, there was a lion’s roar… but what do you know of lions?” Tears in her eyes.
“Jordan,” she continued, “you are the keeper of those days. Are you making accounts?” The granddaughter nodded. “Good. This – how do you always say it – this ‘crassdoggish’ world will need to know how things were before the Agency, before the quadrants, and most of all, before the WiRE. Promise me you’ll never tap into it, Jaybird.”
“Tilly, you’re my grandma, and you raised me well. I’ll be a Throwback ‘til I die. I’ll stay freeclear and keep peace.” Her grandmother poured more tea in a silent prayer of thanks.
© 2013 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
I have been toying with the idea of this story for a long while, as I ponder our dangerous future and watch kids all but implant cell phones into their brains. The loss of peace has been weighing on me. Then Brenda’s Sunday Whirl Wordle gave me bits and pieces that seemed to string together with a common rhythm to give me that hardest part – an actual beginning. Thanks, Brenda, for the feast of words!
This also appears “in the margins” at Poets United and at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads’ Open Link Monday, where I am the second-newest toad in the whole danged place. Congrats to LaTonya for joining us; Mary had to bid us adieu because she has so much to accomplish. Mary will be missed, and we will look forward to what LaTonya is up to! Peace, Amy
The Real Cie
I can really picture this scene in my mind because of your expressive writing.
It’s not just the kids with the implanted devices. I’m almost fifty, and I see people my age yapping away via the Bluetooth while in line to order their coffee and bagel. Rude much?
Grace
Interesting snapshots ~ I hope the grandchildren don’t forget but the peer pressure and techno society are pretty strong influences ~ I am watching my youngest slowly get caught up and she will grow up in a different future from mine ~ Have a good week Amy
brian miller
very interesting bit to your story…its got some familiar pieces to it that may end up being wha i think by the time you are done with it…kind of a sci fi fable…interesting…something fresh from you…i like it..
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks, Brian. Yes, a real departure. We’ll see where it takes us. Having been scribbling for months and wonder whether tomorrow’s Wordle will lead me to another chapter, plus whom I will introduce from Jordan’s world next. A
Jim
I like it, Amy. As you, I have often thought of what will happen when we over tech. Or get taken over by a new super power. I am too old for force working long (remnants of Nazi Germany).
There are people who live like this now. When we were in Egypt we saw people who had taken over the cemeteries for homes. There was no plumbing, electricity, nor heat or AC. But they didn’t have that either where they had stayed before living there. Those lucky enough to “work” combed the garbage for food and things that could be ‘recycled’ and sold.
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Jim
Keep writing please, and let’s see where this will take us. 🙂
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Sharp Little Pencil
My God, Jim, ain’t it the truth. The “first world” stares into cells and pads and what have you, detached from meaningful conversation with other educated people, and the third world is scavenging for a living. Just as bad is that these two worlds live next to each other – especially vivid in India… thanks for a great comment, plus more food for thought and encouragement on my project! Peace, Amy
margaretbednar
The world is ever changing… it’s all how we handle it. Do we still make time for important things? TV has all but disappeared from my life… I know I adore my iPhone – stay in touch with friends otherwise lost… yes – my kids are always connected. But, I think, so am I…
My parents (almost 90) just got an answering machine they barely know how to use… not so sure that is a good thing either…. 🙂 I find your story fascinating, though… keep at it.
Sharp Little Pencil
Tough, choosing which medium to abandon and which to take up. I feel for your folks. Remember having to write out instructions for my mom to use the VCR! “Press POWER. If Power light does not come on, make sure it’s plugged in…” Thanks, M!
grapeling
you tap into dystopia with chilling clarity, Amy…
Roger Green
Yeah, I fret about it too…
oldegg
I often prattle along to my kids (all adults) about every advancement we make in technology we lose something quite precious that may be lost forever. These memories are precious but painful too especially when we are creating new diseases and destruction through our blindness.
Sharp Little Pencil
Too true. My dad said in the 70s, as workers at his plant were being phased out over costs, that if anything would sink America, it would be GREED. And that’s part and parcel of the problem, no? Thanks, Robin… Amy
1sojournal
I’m fairly certain I would be very much like your Jordan. The past has always fascinated me and writing down the everyday things because no one can know what tomorrow may bring. I also really like the connection between child and grandparent and where the lessons learned began. Hope you continue the story, it is definitely something I would like to read further.
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/06/30/wild-gift/
Sharp Little Pencil
Thanks for the encouragement, Elizabeth. I may actually work on this separately from my blog, I’m not sure. Wanted to float the concept out there and then perhaps shop it to those persnickety publications which insist that posted material “has already been published.” Hmmm… seems like a worthwhile enterprise. Thanks again, and will visit you, Amy
Kerry O'Connor
I am a great fan of Dystopian literature and am intrigued by your idea of an Agency, the WiRE and how folks might stand up to it. Your narrative style is very good to read, and I love your word: ‘crassdoggish’. Thank you for sharing.
Sharp Little Pencil
That word came out of nowhere, and I was tickled that it fell off my fingers onto my pencil! Glad you liked it too, Kerry.
brenda w
“Promise me you’ll never tap into it….” I can see a future chapter where that promise gets broken. 😉
This is wonderful writing, Amy. I’m engaged in the story, and will enjoy future installations. Great concept to explore….!
Sharp Little Pencil
As noted above, I may just work on it separately and submit for publication, and since pub’s are so picky about whether or not something has been “published” by way of a blog, you may not see Jordan for awhile… sorry. Have to think it over… So glad you liked what I did with your Wordle. Props to you, ma’am. Amy
Nanka
A sane balance between the old and new is maintained here in this part……….now I’m curious to know which side the balance will tilt in future instalments!! 😉
Pamela
Love your character, Jordan, Amelita. Very nice prose piece. Thanks for reading my past couple of poems for dVerse, it is greatly appreciated.
Paz,
Pamelita
brian miller
thanks for sharing it at dverse as well….how is the settling in after your move?
Mary
Deep, Amy. Glad that you shared. Truly I should not be missed, as I will be around as much as ever. Keep checking my blog. You will see. I always appreciate your visits and always enjoy your words!
kaykuala
A lot of serious business one is aware about but not writing about it. And you, Amelita is always the one who makes it happen. It is a sad reality that is poignantly preserved here. Conflicts will not have a finality as long as one side thinks it deserves more and better than others! Great thoughts and thanks for sharing, Ma’am!
Hank
Sharp Little Pencil
Hank, I guess it’s not enough that I ‘survey today’ and see injustice… now I look to the future!!
vandana
It is worrisome indeed
annell4
I enjoyed reading your piece. Very imaginative and painted new pictures.
Renee Espriu
I like it alot, Amy! Doesn’t surprise me you could write like this. A bit of futuristic meets yesterday and it flows like here and now. Have missed visiting due to circumstance. Glad I didn’t miss this one.
laughwithme45
Pour me some tea too! I want to keep reading!
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