The Siren
Older men
seasoned
schooled in seduction
bandied like young bucks
at the sight of
her winsome face
her womanly walk
Behold, that silksultry cool
© 2013 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
Mama Zen at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads asked us for eight. Eight lines, eight words, anything Eight.
Eight lines to describe the face a thousand words could not paint… I’ve known this woman. Today, she’s still got it… she just uses it to better advantage!
Also at my poetic perch, Poets United.
Peace, Amy
Sharp Little Pencil 
El Guapo
YOWZA!
brian miller
ha, if you got it use it…and leave them all mezmerized in your passing…smiles.
Sara v
You got it all right! 🙂
mybeautfulthings
Using it to better advantage – yes, I like that! 🙂
coalblack
Behold, indeed!
grapeling
mmm. mmm. mmmmmmm.
margaret
ZING! This is outstanding! I’ve bookmarked it. I’ve been collecting a number of amazing poems lately, gonna make me my own personal poetry book, stapled and tucked away for me to keep on my shelf. Glad to add your name to it 🙂 I’m sure this won’t be the last.
whimsygizmo
LOVE this phrase:
“silksultry cool”
🙂
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly)
Great piece…”silksultry cool” wish I had it. 🙂
Kerry O'Connor
Very nicely delivered here, Amy.
Mama Zen
Love this!