Isn’t this prehistorically fantastic? A sci-fi movie buff’s dream!
Westward into the Sun
Chuggin our old used one
cross country, west of west
Buffalo to LA; I know
how these solo road trips
settle my nettled head
Riley-bound; she needs
the wheels but so chill
she was willin to wait
for a not-so-late model
sun-bleached redmobile
Utah. At first, a burst
of tumbled weeds and
You can have this, Brigham
Gradually it blooms with
looming, wise granite cliffs
as if the earth began here
I see the turtle’s back, legend
of indigenous peoples and
remember we are but riders
on this weathered, whirling rock
In my sights, a magic range
Undeniably and completely pink
I think, where is passage?
Answer: Men blew a hole
straight through, a stark arch
How rude, I say aloud
Typical of humans to blast
a magnificent thing of beauty
in order to accommodate
RVs, SUVs, and I, who
would have driven many miles
to go around this mound
of natural wonder. Now I
understand why the Mormons
saw this as paradise on earth
© 2014 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
dverse Poets wanted poems about the road. This was one of the best trips in my life; on my Bucket List, actually, to make a cross-country trip. Stayed with friends, saw my girl. Happy time. Image courtesy of WikiMedia Commons. Peace, Amy
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
I wish I’d been wirh you. I agree about how rude it is to despoil our world with ribbons of blackstuff to ride on.
kaykuala
Getting around on one’s own steam is the best there is. One at liberty to stop or stay with lots of diversions in between. An experience and an education rolled into one.In the process abuses to the environment can never be missed Wonderful write Amelita!
Hank
Madhura
I really love this. like how you see the turtle’s back, and legends… Beautifully done… Made me wish I was with you on that road trip!
journalread
Stunning poem, stunning image.
Roger Green
Only been to Utah once. My exploration of the US west is quite limited. cool image and poem.
brian miller
i see the turtles back…cool reference that ames….man blew a hole straight thru….another very telling thing about us…we will make a way….but probably think little about what we are doing when we do…i would love to make that roadtrip across country though…
grapeling
love this. ok, to my weird eye, that sand carving looks like a rubber ducky. maybe i should lay off the coffee… ~
Laurie Kolp
Magnificent, Amy… such wondrous beauty out there. It’s a shame some never notice.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
We humans will do anything to shorten our way from A to B.. sounds like a great drive Amy..
whimsygizmo
Love this, Ames. Especially:
“Gradually it blooms with
looming, wise granite cliffs
as if the earth began here”
kimnelsonwrites
Love the journey. Love hearing your voice again. Hope Riley is feeling a bit better… and that you are, too.
shanyns
Very very neat write. Love your thoughts and images – well done and a very welcome addition to Poetics!
mybeautfulthings
I loved that post. There’s nothing quite like a road trip to lift the soul (though I do agree about the black ribbons). We have done a couple of road trips in your beautiful country, from Prescott, Arizona through lots of national Parks to San Francisco and from Prescott the other way, through lots of National Parks to Denver.
Can I ask you to have a look at my poem, Just the Baby ICU. I’d really value your comments. 🙂
Susan
Understanding Brigham via the road is a neat neat device! I have only seen Utah from the air, but this poem takes me there, where the roads–all of them–must have messed with quite a bit of beauty to allow us there. (Hey! It’s good to see you!)
ihatepoetry
Loved all the twists and turns of this. The ending is beautiful and perfect. Love from Mosk
vandana
nature is always beautiful in every way:)
charliezero1.wordpress.com
I really love this poem a lot. Great visuals and twist. The ending was epic.
wow! It’s great to be back again and reading you and all my poet friends. 🙂
I will be posting new poems soon. 🙂
tatiusdarksong
Great images you created here nice work
purplepeninportland
Love this, Amy. ‘we are riders on this weathered, whirling rock’ – gorgeous.