Alice and the door. Wood of hallway mouth. Come and go, go there to other.
Greet days of tokens that go, away. Type the write of it. Desk the way to thought of chair and desk, Alice and hand.
Oak. Oak the way to Alice. Fro and for.
Chocolate Stein
Chocolate is. Color brindle barn, silent the waft.
Smile chocolate of kitchen, orange stain the bowl.
The bowl brindle; chocolate fine and feeling, cat nips at cream for dream.
© 2015 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
In the Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, we are conjuring Gertrude Stein. Does it all make a bit of sense now? I sort of hope not! Amy
whimsygizmo
Oh, Amy, these are WONDERFUL! I especially adore “wood of hallway mouth” and “Type the write of it.” And who couldn’t love the word “brindle?” 🙂
sharplittlepencil
De, great comment, thanks. Your faves were all mine, too! A
kaykuala h
Very interesting take Amelita! It really brings poetry to a higher level. Steinisms can go many directions. It gives way to a poet’s free mind1
Hank
sharplittlepencil
Hank, it was being up at 3 am that really freed my mind! Amelita
Sherry Blue Sky
Oh you have captured her style completely. I enjoyed this so much!!!!! Yay!
sharplittlepencil
Friends sweet with love, chair beckons read me.
sharplittlepencil
Pardon me… friends SWEET LOVE. Ha ha ha. Thanks, guys!
rose
egging on the Easter and groovin on your ‘tude
sharplittlepencil
LOL, I was thinking about Halloween and how kids egg houses… and how glad no one in my neighborhood has made the connection at Easter. But then, those would be hard-boiled eggs, right? Amy (wink)
ManicDdaily
Super super clever. Very well done, Amy–very Stein-like–but also very much you, and vivid and lively. Thanks! k .
georgeplace2013
“Type the write of it. Desk the way to thought of chair and desk”
Wonderful, Amy. And I’ll take chocolate under any genre : )
Marian
Glad to see that Alice B. has made an appearance here 🙂
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade)
Love ’em!