Dear Straight Guys,
It’s not like darts
Not if you’re smart
Not “point and shoot”
It’s not like b-ball
Not at all
She’s more than a rim to hit
and webbing to fall through
She’s neither mark nor target
The real woman lies beyond
what you’ll see
when you see her
As much as she wants you
(and make damned sure she wants you,
or we’ll have more than words, little man)
she needs even more
What lies within us is a world
An ecosystem
A universe of the delicate sublime,
of intricate, meandering passages
She’s a labyrinth and you must
must must must
caress the key, finesse the lock
with time and care, the kind
you’ve never shown your own
So talk to her
Let her guide you
She has places that need
the same soft kisses you place on her mouth
down south at the delta
And just in case you still think
you hold all the power, here’s a thought
After you don the raincoat to
dance in the lovely dew, think about this:
Whose parts will disappear in the meeting?
Who welcomes in, and who is swallowed up?
She has unfathomable fathoms
of phantom bliss
Remember that
from the very first kiss
© 2015 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
For ABC Wednesday, we are on the letter F. That’s for “finesse,” you naughty children. Also on the Tuesday Platform at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads! Amy
Björn Rudberg (brudberg)
Oh yes.. and I can assure that most men have depths too.. they are just dim enough to don’t realize that…and how much it could help them.. but if you’re cock-sure of your own simplicity you will just lack the tools to understanding anything beyond moving pictures on the TV.
sharplittlepencil
Yes, Bjorn! How sad that young people are getting sex tips from media – the last place one should look….
Sherry Blue Sky
Oh this is good, kiddo! I love “what lies within us is a world…..of meandering passages.” and “she needs even more”. Wonderful!
sharplittlepencil
Thanks, Sherry. Yup, just ask a woman of a certain age… we are CERTAIN!
lesliebc
“Who welcomes in, and who is swallowed up?” My favourite line in the entire poem! I’ve just experienced a separation and the f***ing idiot still doesn’t get it! LOL
Leslie
abcw team
sharplittlepencil
Oh, Leslie,this is the BEST comment. I read it to Lex and he smiled his knowing smile. He has three sisters, and he knows what’s what!!
Sanaa Rizvi
The real woman lies beyond
what you’ll see
when you see her
Powerful write 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
sharplittlepencil
Sanaa, thanks for this wonderful comment. So glad you stopped by!
Polly
Aw…’she’s a labyrinth’ – perfect 😀
sharplittlepencil
Yeah, we are JUST that complex, LOL. Thanks, Polly!
Roger Green
So I’m going to take a cold shower now. It IS warm out, after all.
sharplittlepencil
Ha ha ha, you make-a me laugh!
Mama Zen
LOVE this!
sharplittlepencil
Thanks, from one mama to another.
Cressida
It’s not like darts LOL….A ‘how to be a good lover ‘manual is not the solution..:) Enjoyed your poem.
sharplittlepencil
So true, Cressida! We used to have a book about sex questions “you were afraid to ask,” but the best story comes from the telling, right?
gravadee
very modern, loved the read, kudos
sharplittlepencil
So glad you stopped by! Thanks
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com
Wow! That’s telling ’em. how it is.
sharplittlepencil
…or how we wish it was? You have to keep that message out there for the young ones, right?
Beat About The Book
Ooh nice. It’s unfamiliar territory for men and the do need to get to know it. “the kind
you’ve never shown your own” – that’s something they need to remember.
sharplittlepencil
Thanks for citing that line, because it is a rather “loaded” comment, no pun intended…
lmkazmierczak
Your finesse with words is outstanding…subtle yet sharp/love the way your mind works♪
sharplittlepencil
Linda, thanks so much for this!
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly)
This is fantastic! You spoke exactly what needs to be said.
sharplittlepencil
…and we all know it. There are too few men into listening. When I found Lex, I knew I was a lucky woman!!
Kerry O'Connor
Isn’t there a bulletin board we can pin this to?
sharplittlepencil
Yes. It’s at my therapist’s office, hee hee hee
tsdwords
Amy, this is so lovely. It should be posted in every high school, college, coffee shop…everywhere!! Not a mark or target, indeed. Thank you ❤
kaykuala h
She’s more than a rim to hit
and webbing to fall through
She’s neither mark nor target
Women are mysteriously attractive. They show themselves just enough physically or intellectually just so they can spring the trap. Men will then be at the defensive but still thinking they had won. Life will be a drag without women-kind! Strong take Amelita!
Hank
Marian
Haha! Okay, let’s go then!
Melody
Firstly my apologies for a late comment, i have been far to busy repairing my blog after a moval from one host to another… and taking care of other things that needed to be taken care of since my husband and i have health issues at the same time.
Fitness or sports of any kind… not my cup of tea, i’ve always hated it, even in the earlie years as a little girl in school…. and since i’ve boken my back at the age of 16 at a sportevent i’ve hated it even more…. some people say sports is addictive, i can’t imagine why 😉
have a nice weekend
Melody (abc-w-team)