This came from a “wordle,” a group of words you can form into a block of art; to create one yourself, click HERE.
Thanks to whichever poet’s blog contained the block (and I apologize that you remain anonymous, I was all over the place today). I can’t reproduce it here, but all the words from the block are in bold. Enjoy! Amy
FIRST TIME (wordle)
Smoldering like an ash-pit and
lush with promise, but
clunky teenage moves
His one hand, awake, cupped my breast
The other was passed out under my back
then resurfaced to hold my head for
a quick nibble at that well-hung boy
The First Time
Dick
I think you might have scared off the more … er … sensitive of our BTP compadres with this, Amy! I thought that it was as clever a working of the wordle words as I’ve read. Without knowing the provenance of the piece, I’d have read and evaluated it as a neat and witty little piece of poetic rudery. Good to read something well-structured and stylish that’s light-hearted and a bit raunchy.
Sharp Little Pencil
Dick, I have to tell you, this one hit me out of nowhere! To look at a Wordle, which is a fun and silly thing, and suddenly have all that stuff dredge up like I’m some teenager? Honestly! And me, a pastor’s wife, LOL!
Thanks for a good critique; I appreciate that you “got” my style while still rollicking in… oh, the clover, I guess! Amy
EKSwitaj
Wow, this is so far from what the words suggested to me! I like the surprise. 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Ha! Like I told Dick, the words jumped off the screen and ravaged me, naughty pastor’s wife that I am!! Thanks so much for stopping by – I promise to be more faithful to the prompts come February when things have settled in… it’s all good, just not news I can say at the moment…
Loved yours, too, of course! Amy
Deb
Oh! It’s a lush romp. So glad I found the link on EKS’s blog! 🙂 You should link it to BTP!
Well done, and such a quick way of it! Reminds me of young lust.
Sharp Little Pencil
Deb, I did link it to BTP despite one person’s playful warning that it might be a bit risque! But since I posted late, thought I would share where I could.
Isn’t EK the end? Love her stuff and will stop by yours next. Young lust, sweet lust… was it Bobby Vinton? ha ha Amy
Tilly Bud
My eyes just went so wide I can see behind me without turning round! That never happened before.
Excellent use of the wordle, you minx. 🙂
Sharp Little Pencil
Ha ha! Best comment yet, Tilly! Yeah, I kind of shocked myself with that one, too. Imagine all those little Wordle bits swirling round my brain… and the thing that comes out of it is SEX! Bad pastor’s wife! BAAAAAD! ;^) Amy
Gertrude
This infitmaroon is off the hizool!