Well, I’m not one for bragging (and if I am, will someone please let me know so I can stuff some humble pie in my face), but Polly Robinson of Polly: Writings and Witterings posed what may be her first prompt, and I could not resist. After posting, I found out it was one of three favorites! To see her comments, and other winners as well, please see: THIS POST. And now let’s get down to some poeting. Poemizing. Poemization. Er, writing poetry:
Remember Passion
Passion – all-consuming,
glorious blaze of every
sense alive and alight,
every synapse snapping,
a fire for
the belly
the brain
the heart
the hearth that hums beneath
her sheath and his jeans
Passion burns benevolently
for a time, somewhat contained
(but if the team mascot loves the
place-kicker, they head for a
fireproof locker, kissing in shadows
of the homecoming bonfire)
The fire can consume lovers.
The burn doesn’t always hurt.
Passion will wane, but
the reflection will remain
in the rearview mirror of their minds,
glowing on lonely nights,
a long-gone ember of…
Remember?
© 2012 Amy Barlow Liberatore/Sharp Little Pencil
For Poetic Bloomings, a poem about fire, burning passion… and all that follows. Also at my poetic bonfire, Poets United. Peace to all, Amy
Meena Rose
Amy!
You sure had me blushing. While the locker scene was never mine to experience, I totally was engulfed in those flames.
“the hearth that hums beneath // her sheath and his jeans” = brilliant!
vivinfrance
Powerful analogy.
Misky
Hi, Amy!
I so enjoy reading your blog that I’m nominating you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Some people prefer not to accept blog awards, and if you’re of that thinking, I hope that this nomination still brings new followers and friends to your blog.
When you have a moment, pop over to http://miskcooks.com/2012/06/19/the-versatile-blogger-award/ for details of your nomination.
~Misky
Jae Rose
If I look in the rear view mirror maybe I can remember a little..what fire-some..tall words..a big shiny penny..Jae
SaraV
Yay Amy! I loved that poem too:-) The closing line on this one is haunting…”a long gone ember of
remember?” Love it
Debbie
Oh Amy . . .no wonder this was a favorite pick!!! 🙂 Awesome writing girl! Passionate poeming!
claudia
nah…you’re not bragging..congrats..i’m not at all surprised..smiles…love the passionate fire here…and the fireproof locker..ha…just wondering how fireproof it really is when the flames are going high..smiles
vivinfrance
PS You got a mention in my Posse Poem for Joseph Harker’s Reverie: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2012/06/17/posse-poem/
ihatepoetry
Gorgeous and brilliant! Inspired! Loved it! Love you! – Mosk
hollyannegetspoetic
Hi Amy – how have I not found your lovely blog before now? lol. Seriously, I loved your poem submitted to Polly’s prompt. I really like your style – looking forward to reading more of your stuff. 🙂
purplepeninportland
Burnin’ and churnin’, Amy.